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Maybe it could be movies 5 and 6 then

It sounds like a logical followup to STID.
However, the plot is too busy. It would need a very large budget to make (which is not going to happen).
It would probably need to be split into 2 movies.
If a budget was granted for this, you would have a movie like Batman v Superman.
Nice to look at, but way too much going on story-wise.
btw, your casting is very good. Especially Jason Momoa.
Schwarzenegger as Kahless is an interesting choice.

Yeah well I liked STID lol

lol wth? this sounds pretty dam close to into darkness unfreezing khan for help against klingons only to have him turn and want to defeat the federation and kirk must find a way to save all ,, yes they're different circumstances but the main story is basically the same
if they're bringing chris hemnsworth for a ratings boost ,, then it will definitely have some kind of time travel story

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This would be for the one after (trek 5)

Nah, I feel like these Kelvin movies need to do things totally different from the Prime verse. They need to get away from Khan or Genesis or even the Borg, but instead either give us something totally new or play up something we've only heard mentioned in passing.
I do agree about the war with the Klingons, but it should be something the Romulans have manipulated both sides into. It's up to Kirk to make peace with the Klingons and join up with them to defeat the Romulans.
But they are talking about getting Chris Hemsworth in there somehow so this could be a Yesterday's Enterprise type situation.
Revenge is the most important meal of the day.

Final scenes
http://www.imdb.com/board/10098382/board/flat/214799383

alternatively could've been ST3 instead of Beyond - just have it set after the 5 year mission (5 years after STID)
bet it would've made about 500m ww

Oh, I don't wish her death but that would be interesting. Dramatic and unexpected.

Maybe she could cameo..before khan slits her throat.

Better than nothing but then, if she doesn't appear, I won't spend my money. To each his/her own^^

Given the OP abit of a rewrite so its even better

The fate of Jaylah would be revealed in a conversation between Kirk and bones:
-Say Jim whatever happened to that white alien girl from that planet we got stranded on?
-What?..oh her, yeh uh, she didn't pass the entrance exam into the Academy..
-Oh
-Yeah, we won't be seeing her again.

If Jaylah doesn't come back I ain't seeing it.

I see you have cast Brent Spiner here as Dr Soong - I think you could improve this plot even further if you had him working on a sarcasm chip for an early Data prototype. It would be interesting to see an artificial intelligence struggling to come to terms with this seemingly obvious concept
The
truth
about Marti Pellow

That's the greatest compliment ever. Thank you

It actually sounds like something Roberto Orci and Alex Kurtzman would scribe.
"A voice from behind me reminds me. Spread out your wings you are an angel."

Bro, don't you want to see stories with original ideas? You sound 40 years old who can't let go of the past. If you want to watch TWOK, TSFS and TUC then just watch those on your DVD. No one wants to pay money to films to see the same stuff they seen before. Why so many hated TFA.
I don't think they will make anymore of these because Beyond flopped so badly but if they do, come up with something original, not just make movies for middle age Trekkies who want to relive their childhood until they die.

And TSFS

For what? This has to be one of the worst ideas for a sequel I ever heard. Its fanboy writing at its worst. You basically took TWOK and TUC and combined them for a sequel. You couldn't get any lazier writing a movie if you were writing The Force Awakens and that even comes off way more original than what you just wrote.
It would make even less money than Beyond did because Trekkies know they would have run out of ideas with bland copying like that.

thank you