Itty the One-Eyed Man
[Verse 1]
Itty walks the town each night
Half blind but sees the stars so bright
In the shadows he hides his fright
And everyone’s unkind
[Verse 2]
Creepy whispers they follow his path
Feet are cold on the windy bath
Lonely heart feels the world’s wrath
And a tear he can’t find
[Chorus]
Stab stab stab his soul on fire
They all conspire
Stab stab stab his lone desire
To touch the sky
[Verse 3]
Nimda hears him cry out loud
Wipes his tears from fragile shroud
But he’s lost in the cruel crowd
And the sun never shines
[Verse 4]
Darkened alleys call his name
Broken heart he takes the blame
World around him all the same
Forever unkind
[Chorus]
Stab stab stab his soul on fire
They all conspire
Stab stab stab his lone desire
To touch the sky
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My password is password

Well I hope that you continue to have fun with it and create. Feel free to share on here with us too.
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Thanks
That was the first time I tried Suno, so the credit goes to you.
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Very very good, Slash Dot! Most excellent in fact!
An inspired idea.
I especially enjoyed the choice of 80s electronica as a genre.
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I had to listen to the first one after this one and I still think the first one is better.
They are both good but the beat and energy to the first one is more up Donna's street to my mind
The second one is too sombre and cold for Donna (But it finishes well with that last minute uplft!). Perhaps give something like that to someone who is more direct and ruthless
It's certainly a good take on the whole Suno thing /.
Maybe you'll inspire other minds to follow suit
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Here's the alternate version
and the lyrics
[Verse 1]
Lilith isn't a friend
She's a thorn in my side
I don't like Lilith
Can't let it slide
[Verse 2]
Lilith is a bitch
Her games drive me mad
Get her far from here
She's twisted and bad
[Chorus]
Get her out of my sight
I won't say it twice
Get her out of my sight
She's cold as ice
[Bridge]
Every time she's near
I feel the chill inside
Every word she speaks
It's like a wicked tide
[Verse 3]
Lilith isn't a friend
She brings stormy weather
Get her out of my sight
Let me feel light as a feather
[Chorus]
Get her out of my sight
I won't say it twice
Get her out of my sight
She's cold as ice
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The 80's technological kick to the music was a good choice too
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Thanks
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The Fugazi one is pretty damn sweet but the Donna one kicks ass!
Well done /.
It's amazing that AZN is as listless with music behind her as she is to read.
Lovely job all round!
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I made original songs from posts here.
azn
Fugazi
Donna's love for Lilith
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Ok then Bobby, that's very admirable of you and more importantly a solid show of trust which can be taken to the bank
If any /.'s try and pass themselves off as you from this point forward we'll all be wise to their game
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No they did not Siggy, so I shall respect their right to privacy and not share them.
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Well I hope that they have given permission to you for sharing those submissions even if they wish to have their name not associated with them Bobby
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It is already extremely popular, Siggy. As was the case with the song which restored me to full health, there are a lot of posters who have private messaged me their contributions because they feel embarrassed.
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Well that's very imaginative of you Bobby
I think the Dom Som challenge will be undertaken by many just due to its name
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No I wasn’t. I was eating dark chocolate Maltesers and Salt n Lineker crisps.
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Were you eating dim sum when you came up with the challenge Bobby?
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Well I had to call it SOMETHING, so my first choice was The Dim Sum Challenge.
Then I thought ‘well no it can’t be Dim Sum so……
Dim Sum became Dom Som and then I figured ‘well it is a song challenge isn’t it’ so it become
The Dom Som Song Challenge.
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I'm happy that you like it Bobby but unlike your Wee Willy song it just doesn't work for me
So what exactly does Dom Som mean?
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Well I think it works just fine, Siggy. I mean there is only so much that you can do when the only lyrics are ‘ohmmmm’. It is the Dom Som Challenge and boy you certainly gave it a challenge! You are the winner so far.
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OK Bobby, I'll give it a go
And here is what Sun gave me on each occasion:
The was the first one that came out of the system
This was the second one provided by Suno
And here's the original:
Didn't really work, did it?
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