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theOnlyOutsider — 9 years ago(September 24, 2016 12:38 AM)
Bleepy took home the game and turned it into a weasel warrior sword missle transporter time passage in hopes of changing the way his life was going but he didnt know if that was all entirely possible cause you see as the homeboy brad used to say you can smoke a cigar but that dont mean you can drive and even if you own a car dont mean itll go far.
Stop here mate. Jukie gets out of the car and pulls out a water pistol. Dont want no trouble Maxwell, you hear me good?
Indeed I do. Maxwell replied.
Do you have your supersoaker on you? In case anyone come around looking to start trouble?
Maxwell pulls out two supersoakers and gives them both a quick trigger pull to show that his guns were both loaded.
Okay good they shouldnt be any problems but in case they is I just wanted to know you was carrying cause if you wasnt I had another one in my trunk but it dont have water so it might not do you any good.
Maxwell nods. Why didnt you fill it? Better safe than sorry, right?
Bleepy smiles. You know we gotta a city water shortage. Didnt wanna waste the water. Anyway, I gotta go grease these suckers and before you ask Im sure I got this one. If I need you Ill bleep.
A few minutes later Maxwell met his true love. Foxy Mcflurry. She was all sorts of good and sweet. Lots of men knew her from the club. She was Vinny Geckos main lady. Hed drown you in supersoaker if he knew you wanted his girl. But, Max, he didnt care. Nope. Not Max, all Max wanted was a ride on the town. His roof top down crusing the city and admiring the skyline. That was Maxwell at his best. He loved sight.
Foxy and her gal Myra come strolling into the alley. Maxwell asks the chicks if they dig his ride. Indeed they do. Maxwell asks if they wanna go for a ride on the town. They dig the idea and hop into the Max-Mobile. We just gotta wait for my friend. His name is Bleepy Portman.
Bleepy steps out of the door and into the alley. He can see the chicks in the car and he isnt all that happy. Doesnt say nothing though. He just tucks his supersoaker in the holster and heads over to the car. Just hops in he dont care to ask question and Maxwell being Maxwell knew exactly what he should do. Lets make this a night to remember.
Maxwell smiles at the chicks through his rearviewmirror.
They giggle and do a little cheer.
THREE
The Mystic was a beautiful place. The texture was holographic sorta like looking at a holographic moon or something. It was like no city youd ever seen. Maxwell knew Bleepy had only a few good weeks left in him if he was lucky so he wanted to do something nice for the guy. Sure the mystic is considered the suicide city since everyone usually takes one last drive down sunset avenue before going home and killing themselves. Just a way of life I guess. One more party before calling it quits. For a dead man to be Bleepy was overly paranoid. He kept shaking like maybe his nerves was acting up. Was it the chicks? Or cancer drugs? Was he even taking cancer drugs?
Maxwell, do these women know that we have four or five more stops before we can have any fun?
Maxwell slowly turns his head.
Yeah, they know. Is that cool ladies?
The ladies giggle and go..Yeah, its cool. We love adventures.
Bleepy turns around to ask the ladies a question.
Say, you ladies wouldnt know any water holders, would you?
A water holder was one of the most important jobs in the city. They kept guns hydrated and crime violent. It wouldnt be criminal without a little rush of danger. Though, water holding jobs are hard to come by these days since the great draught swept into Paradise Azure.
Foxy goes like Yeah, I know quite a few actually. My man controls this city.
Bleepy looks paler than a bucket but he maintains color and proceeds to ask Foxy who her man is and of course she tells him Vinny Gecko.
Bleepy and Gecko have a history. Supposedly Gecko killed his ex wife and daughter over some stolen jewels that Gecko thought Bleepy stole but it turned out to be Neil Mars so Gecko paid Bleepy all this money and told him the kingdom would be his as long as he didnt fire back. Bleepy didnt fire back. He took the money but he felt like a pawn in some cruel game. But, Vinny Gecko likely wouldnt recognize Bleepy now that hes cancer ridden and lost most of the weight he had last time he was Gecko.
Bleepy coughs up a grin and turns around.
Say, Foxy, how is your old man these days?
FOUR
The car rolled into dugmore ally around 8 pm that evening, The chicks were feeling groovy smoking a joint with Max. All giggling and such having a grand old time.
Bleepy steps out of the vehicle and proceeds to the pool hall. He pulls out his supersoaker and kicks down the door. This was an easy score. Some kid was working the register. Bleepy felt bad but he had to do what he had to do. He wondered what Vinny Gecko would do if he caught the two of them with his chick. Probably kill us. But what did it matter? Bleepy was already a dead man walking.
If Gecko caught them with his chicks he would take the money too an