Thesis Statement (should be based off a peer reviewed scholarly article)
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Filmboard FACTS — 6 years ago(January 26, 2020 06:21 AM)
At well over 40 words, this is a run on sentence. You need to take care to break up your ideas with the proper punctuation. This one sentence is almost a paragraphs worth of information.
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Just the FACTs
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️ Christina 1986-05-20 
— 6 years ago(January 26, 2020 06:36 AM)I didn't actually turn it in, yet, but my main worry is I couldn't find a full copy of it online from the library, just an excerpt. It's do at the stroke of midnight.
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Filmboard FACTS — 6 years ago(January 26, 2020 06:40 AM)
Something like this…
One reason Baroque music is “the best way to go” is because it is the fresh start of classical music in history as we know it. This lays many/major foundations for music in the future. Aside from being an aesthetic go-to and inciter for competition among professional classical orchestral musicians it also serves to…
This last sentence needs to be expanded on as you use the term "aside from" but never give a bolstering point.
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️ Christina 1986-05-20 — 6 years ago(January 26, 2020 06:46 AM)
Oh, so my last claim is like the catnip of the essay/paper?
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