Flawless, until… *spoilers*
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kenny-164 — 18 years ago(June 28, 2007 06:36 AM)
The only way to "show" the backstory of why Travis and Jane fell apart would be to use a flashback. The film used the device of a home movie to show how much they loved each other, how Hunter was part of them, and how they were all a group with Walt and Anne. But of course no home movie would exist to show the bad times.
There are no other flashbacks in the film. No real flashbacks of any kind.
So, Wenders could have conceivably altered the script to show what happened with flashbacks. But would that have really flowed better than the telling device used?
I have my doubts.
A third possibility would have been to begin the film chronologically at the point that Jane and Travis began to break apart. That of course would have been a very different story, and even less effective, most likely. -
eighties_rule — 11 years ago(October 17, 2014 11:30 AM)
I heavily disagree. That's one of the best scenes in the movie, probably the best. Harry Dean Stanton does a terrific job, it's well written/directed, and it's very impactful/vivid Just for you to see, I've known a couple of people who've seen the movie when it came out and remember those things (described in the scene) like they were actually visible in the movie, not as the character telling them.
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szeoke12 — 11 years ago(December 17, 2014 10:03 PM)
My issue with the monologue is likely one that automatically discredits me. I figured that it was setting up a happy ending. I guess that
really
would have ruined it eh?
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udippel — 10 years ago(September 23, 2015 01:02 PM)
No, can't see that.
Flawless, kind of, including that scene. Without the 2 hours, it would be out of place. But it isn't, because we know parts of the story. And we have seen Travis saying nil. Maybe for 4 years? And anyway, he's of the silent sort.
And then, finally, everything he wanted to say could be said. And everything that Jane had conversed with him in his absence, it was said, too. Though in his absence.
He doesn't look at her, and that makes a lot of sense. Finally, after four years, the first, and the right person to tell that story.
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albert-wayne — 10 years ago(September 28, 2015 12:36 PM)
I think the only problem is that all the mystery behind the two of them collapsed, and the revelation was notshocking. It was real, real problems between men and woman.
Now, I loved it, it grounded the film even more. I would have hated for them to have been involved in any criminal activities like it was hinted before.
I loved it, but perhaps some people prefer what their imagination can come up with, which would have been very good too.
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Porn_Flakes — 9 years ago(May 23, 2016 11:36 AM)
I had completely the opposite reaction to that segment of the film. For me, that part single handily transformed the film from a very good one, into a nigh on perfect one. I've never had such a strong emotional response to any film as I did that one, particularly during the Travis monologue. It reminded me of aspects of my own life. I felt connected to the characters and story as a result of that part so, to me, it's very important.
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NotASpeckOfCereal — 9 years ago(June 10, 2016 09:42 AM)
To me, this film is two parts:
The first part is the "show, don't tell" Wenders part. The entire film up to the point of the peep show dialog is about that mystery of the past, but it is for those living in in the present, especially Walt and Ann, and what it means to them having Travis come back into their life. That could have been the entire story and in a way, it is, if you consider the film in two parts.
The second part starts where Travis and Hunter take off. We never see Walt and Ann again. This part is all about absolution and resolution. The dialog in the peep show room is a very important part of this, but not because the writers felt then need to explain the part 1 mystery to the film viewing audience. No, it's because these are the things Travis needs to tell Jane, those pent up things that he was given a chance to explain to her, a rare opportunity that most of us never get.
There's the shiny nugget of value in that act, and it was done so well.
There is still a mystery, the part in the middle of the past that we never see. The peep show dialog really doesn't tell how they split in real-world details, just the last fleeting emotions; and we can only piece together how Hunter got to Walt and Ann from a few snippets of spoken word. We never really find out what Travis was up to and what he did with those 4 years up to the point that Walt picked him up, except for the fact that at some point, he purchased a piece of land in Paris, Texas.
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PeterBlues — 9 years ago(October 02, 2016 08:01 AM)
the opening parts seem just like the pilot episode of twilight zone "where is everybody", these are both actors you usually don't see in starring roles, i lost interest when more people came into the story. funny a recurrent opinion on this board is being disappointed in the movie as it goes along
screw that,
escape from this treatment where im at,
i opened the hatch,
sneaked off,
to a place where reality is gone,
gonna lie that youre as sweet as you look,
gonna build a sanctuary here of my own,
where the good prevail,
but you wouldn't let me as im thrown back to reality again.