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    SarahJConnor — 9 years ago(December 03, 2016 08:09 PM)

    her breathing in after removing the mask would've been a great final shot.
    but i like finishing her arc with having her decide to head to Houston, so
    remove the alien ship altogether. it's completely useless and undermines the film's tone.
    she finds out the air is breathable, gets in the car and drives til she gets the radio transmission.
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      e216 — 9 years ago(December 05, 2016 07:21 PM)

      I wish the movie had ended after
      she removed her gas mask and spotted the ship way off in the distance
      . It would have made for a hell of a closing shot. I didn't like the
      action and alien close-ups
      that came afterwards at all. I can't be the only one who thinks this would have made for a nice ending, right?

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        smoko — 9 years ago(December 06, 2016 03:37 AM)

        @e216 It's not a bad ending that you've got. The only problem I have is that it doesn't assure us that Michelle will survive, which is why I'd still show her driving to Houston. All I did was replace her fighting the aliens with the deus ex machina of some fighter jets.
        But yes, there are plenty of people like you who don't want the ending spoon-fed to them - just not enough to convince the studios to do it.

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          e216 — 9 years ago(December 06, 2016 07:53 AM)

          It's strange. I usually get really upset when movies have open endings but if 10 Cloverfield Lane had ended with her
          looking at the craft
          , I would have loved it.
          Maybe it's because I didn't care about Michelle's fate as much as I wanted to know what had
          really
          happened.

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            luckiest_strike — 9 years ago(December 27, 2016 06:33 PM)

            Since I was pretty mad about her killing Howard and destroying a possibly invaluable supply of good in the process I lost all interest in her fate at that point. It was also pretty obvious that the air was safe to breathe unless they got to you. I would prefer all endins in this thread over the original one

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              GetOffMyLawn — 9 years ago(December 30, 2016 01:41 AM)

              Her pulling off the mask thinking the air was clean, then boom, Howard was right all along, a few seconds later she realizes she made a mistake and it starts destroying her flesh. Roll credits. I think she should have died at the end, that's what I was thinking when she took off the mask and what I was hoping for. Forget the happy ending and the alien garbage.

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                smoko — 9 years ago(December 30, 2016 04:06 AM)

                @owlfy
                she realizes she made a mistake and it starts destroying her flesh. Roll credits.
                Yikes, we're in David Fincher territory there.

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                  Porrohman — 9 years ago(January 01, 2017 03:46 AM)

                  The endings fine.

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                    Fluig_2013 — 9 years ago(January 09, 2017 03:07 PM)

                    Why of course it was:
                    https://s3-us-west-2.amazonaws.com:443/data.filmboards/images/upload/c4jt321.png

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                      Jimothy3 — 9 years ago(January 09, 2017 02:35 PM)

                      Yeah I'd have preferred that ending. When she sees that ship in the distance it perked my interest and intrigue without giving too much away. It didn't need to go all Tom Cruise in War of the Worlds on us and hammer home that the aliens are big, bad and want to kill everyone. I guess they wanted it to be known that she now has some sort of combat experience that will be of value in Houston, in which case I'd have scrapped that part from the radio message too.

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                        Sequentialist — 9 years ago(February 05, 2017 12:46 PM)

                        The climax and the interaction with the aliens is exactly the same.
                        But instead of that lame cross roads ending she recovers the bottle and drives for a bit then she gets out to relieve herself and meets some hooligan who appears to harm her but she manages to know him out and with the bottle and takes his stuff.
                        The world is chaos now but she may survive.

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                          danmax67 — 9 years ago(February 13, 2017 01:06 PM)

                          It's quite an annoying trope that aliens of unimaginable power and technical advancement are always dispatched rather easily. Typically by methods that would not stop current military let alone super advanced invaders.

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