My edited version is gutted of any personality or thought inspiring prose. Siggie's way of wording things is magical and beautiful. Only intellectually superior individuals can truly appreciate it.
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I'm glad you're so humble about your version. You have a lot to be humble about. Siggie's prose is characterized by flatulence and incorrect syntax. QED
When it happens
You’ll feel like an islander
You’ll see ships…
And they’ll be reminders
That you’re on an island
And that I’m on an island
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