Sexual tension between Anna and Bentley
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dbentley666 — 5 years ago(June 26, 2020 03:51 AM)
For anyone who wants to see a truly original and vigorous thinker in action!
Anna: He is something I wipe off the bottom of my shoe.
Russell (five minutes later, like a lobotomized parrot): Anna wouldn’t want anything to do with someone who is the equivalent being scum underneath her very own shoes anyhow.
Notice how Russell has vastly improved on Anna's prose by leaving out a preposition and adding "very own" (to make it clear that somehow getting something on her own shoes is more worrying than getting it on a borrowed pair -perhaps on someone else's feet?)