hey gang, what did i miss?
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TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 08:55 PM)
Characters are written as close to their resemblance as possible, while still allowing the story to flow smoothly. Besides, whether it's an exact match is irrelevant, it's just a fun story to read. Horatio is just a loon. His narcissism is preventing him to enjoy it.
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TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:02 PM)
First of all, I tried to write your character as you, however, there was no way for it to work without changing the entire plot to the story into the most boring series of adventures ever. No offense. So I incorporated various personality traits from others from the board into your character.
Second, I don't know you well enough to write a Horatio biography, bro. Why don't you tell me your whole life, and all the nuances about your personality traits, and I'll concoct a true life story.
I'll need your place of birth, date, mothers maiden name, home address, and place of work. -
TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:07 PM)
It's done. I'm just posting it in segments.
I like feedback. But yours wasn't helpful. It's like you saying you don't want to buy a Ferrari because it's blue instead of red. There's nothing more that can be done about it. The car is fine, it's a personal preference thing at this point. But that's the equivalence to your gripe.
If there were actual plot points or segments that didn't work, or wasn't interesting, or poorly written, then I'll happily take the feedback. -
TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:14 PM)
People who are miserable in their real life, project that misery onto others on the internet. Doodles, TSP, Dogpuke are prime examples of those who hate themselves and project that hate onto others. FYI…
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Demented_Dogg — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:49 PM)
CloggedEsophagus said...
lol, yeah the fact that your stories are pathetic means i'm unhappy with my life. makes perfect sense.
he said the same thing about me when i told him his porn was pathetic. he really takes these things to heart, but who can blame him. it obvious he puts a lot of work into these endeavors