hey gang, what did i miss?
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TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:02 PM)
First of all, I tried to write your character as you, however, there was no way for it to work without changing the entire plot to the story into the most boring series of adventures ever. No offense. So I incorporated various personality traits from others from the board into your character.
Second, I don't know you well enough to write a Horatio biography, bro. Why don't you tell me your whole life, and all the nuances about your personality traits, and I'll concoct a true life story.
I'll need your place of birth, date, mothers maiden name, home address, and place of work. -
TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:07 PM)
It's done. I'm just posting it in segments.
I like feedback. But yours wasn't helpful. It's like you saying you don't want to buy a Ferrari because it's blue instead of red. There's nothing more that can be done about it. The car is fine, it's a personal preference thing at this point. But that's the equivalence to your gripe.
If there were actual plot points or segments that didn't work, or wasn't interesting, or poorly written, then I'll happily take the feedback. -
TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:14 PM)
People who are miserable in their real life, project that misery onto others on the internet. Doodles, TSP, Dogpuke are prime examples of those who hate themselves and project that hate onto others. FYI…
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Demented_Dogg — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:49 PM)
CloggedEsophagus said...
lol, yeah the fact that your stories are pathetic means i'm unhappy with my life. makes perfect sense.
he said the same thing about me when i told him his porn was pathetic. he really takes these things to heart, but who can blame him. it obvious he puts a lot of work into these endeavors -
Bee — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:26 PM)
c42d6124039a4ebf5136930f8af70e27 said...
It was fun. I almost banged my head on the table in frustration trying to squirm my way out of it but I think I managed in the end.
I could really feel that from your posts. As soon as it started I was like… H isn't going to like this. Hilarious. 10/10 -
TheHoratioChronicles — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:27 PM)
c42d6124039a4ebf5136930f8af70e27 said...
It was fun. I almost banged my head on the table in frustration trying to squirm my way out of it but I think I managed in the end.
Read it. Don't read it. Why be a dick about it? It's not like my entire ego rests on this. It was a fun story I wrote and wanted to share. If anything, my ego rests on the fact that I'm the greatest human being ever. Try to prove that one wrong. -
Bee — 8 years ago(December 06, 2017 09:33 PM)
TheHoratioChronicles said...
Read it. Don't read it. Why be a dick about it? It's not like my entire ego rests on this. It was a fun story I wrote and wanted to share. If anything, my ego rests on the fact that I'm the greatest human being ever. Try to prove that one wrong.
It's great, shredder. Never stop.