The Dom Som Song Challenge!!
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/. — 1 year ago(June 14, 2024 10:26 AM)
Here's the alternate version
and the lyrics
[Verse 1]
Lilith isn't a friend
She's a thorn in my side
I don't like Lilith
Can't let it slide
[Verse 2]
Lilith is a bitch
Her games drive me mad
Get her far from here
She's twisted and bad
[Chorus]
Get her out of my sight
I won't say it twice
Get her out of my sight
She's cold as ice
[Bridge]
Every time she's near
I feel the chill inside
Every word she speaks
It's like a wicked tide
[Verse 3]
Lilith isn't a friend
She brings stormy weather
Get her out of my sight
Let me feel light as a feather
[Chorus]
Get her out of my sight
I won't say it twice
Get her out of my sight
She's cold as ice
My password is password -
∂³∑x² — 1 year ago(June 14, 2024 10:34 AM)
I had to listen to the first one after this one and I still think the first one is better.
They are both good but the beat and energy to the first one is more up Donna's street to my mind
The second one is too sombre and cold for Donna (But it finishes well with that last minute uplft!). Perhaps give something like that to someone who is more direct and ruthless
It's certainly a good take on the whole Suno thing /.
Maybe you'll inspire other minds to follow suit
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/. — 1 year ago(June 14, 2024 12:07 PM)
Itty the One-Eyed Man
[Verse 1]
Itty walks the town each night
Half blind but sees the stars so bright
In the shadows he hides his fright
And everyone’s unkind
[Verse 2]
Creepy whispers they follow his path
Feet are cold on the windy bath
Lonely heart feels the world’s wrath
And a tear he can’t find
[Chorus]
Stab stab stab his soul on fire
They all conspire
Stab stab stab his lone desire
To touch the sky
[Verse 3]
Nimda hears him cry out loud
Wipes his tears from fragile shroud
But he’s lost in the cruel crowd
And the sun never shines
[Verse 4]
Darkened alleys call his name
Broken heart he takes the blame
World around him all the same
Forever unkind
[Chorus]
Stab stab stab his soul on fire
They all conspire
Stab stab stab his lone desire
To touch the sky
My password is password
