Lyrics of a song I wrote.
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Phaenon — 2 years ago(January 30, 2024 10:19 PM)
I like the lyrics Warren, I really do
It's got that iambic cadence which all the good folk songs do by not being too restrained but sticking to certain rules of chord for it to song well
Your two repeated last lines though could be open to interpretation as everything preceding them could be said to have been good intentions filled with love, carrying all into the light.
Just the cynical critic in me, but someone would mention it before too long.
Good stuff, thanks for sharing and keep it up!
Ding Dong
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WarrenPeace — 2 years ago(January 31, 2024 08:36 PM)
Thanx for the feedback and I am cool with it since you did not say something like, "This is **** and you are so wrong with it all you dumb asshole," like those who may have responded with that kinds of crap that are on block that I do not care to see which is why I put those trolls on block in the first place.
Makes this place a lot more tolerable.
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Phaenon — 2 years ago(January 31, 2024 08:45 PM)
It's a brave thing sharing creations Warren (Particularly on here!)
I think it has heart and head about it and could see it being a favourite if it got into the right ears and minds of people looking to tap their toes and take it easy for a bit
Ding Dong
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WarrenPeace — 2 years ago(February 08, 2024 09:32 PM)
Between us you just keep on showing over and over and over again how you are the stupid **** since you are the violent one.
Do us a favor and kill yourself.
Seriously.
No one will miss you anywhere.
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Soul_Venom — 2 years ago(February 08, 2024 11:17 PM)
The idea that violence equals stupidity is false. In fact many technological developments have been driven by military necessity. Not that explaining further would do you and good.
You stupid ****.
Trump is still your President. Charlie Kirk still Wins!
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